CPY-020
Hard constraint
layer: content_system
Optimize downstream value, not click alone
IF a variant increases clicks but lowers qualified action, retention, revenue quality, or trust, THEN reject or segment it ELSE retain.
Why the rule exists
A local metric can improve while the business and reader outcome degrades.
Condition
The rule fires when this evaluates true. Paths marked below must be present in the fact base; the engine reports the rest rather than guessing them.
- ALL
- experiment.click_rate_change gt 0
- ANY
- experiment.qualified_action_change lt 0
- experiment.retention_change lt 0
- experiment.revenue_quality_change lt 0
- experiment.trust_signal_change lt 0
Facts this rule reads
| Path | Source |
|---|---|
experiment.click_rate_change |
You supply it |
experiment.qualified_action_change |
You supply it |
experiment.retention_change |
You supply it |
experiment.revenue_quality_change |
You supply it |
experiment.trust_signal_change |
You supply it |
Then
- reject_or_segment — target
experiment.variant
Else
- retain — target
current_text, No triggering condition is present.
LAKA
- Smallest sufficient intervention
- Yes
- Primary axes
Sources
-
Scientific Advertising — Claude C. Hopkins
Testing, measurement, offers, and accountable advertising. -
Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion — Robert B. Cialdini
Evidence-based principles of influence and ethical persuasion.
The raw rule record
Verbatim from 16-copywriting-rules.json. Also available at /v1/rules/CPY-020.
{
"id": "CPY-020",
"name": "Optimize downstream value, not click alone",
"domain": "copywriting",
"layer": "content_system",
"strength": "hard_constraint",
"human_logic": "IF a variant increases clicks but lowers qualified action, retention, revenue quality, or trust, THEN reject or segment it ELSE retain.",
"when": {
"all": [
{
"path": "experiment.click_rate_change",
"operator": "gt",
"value": 0
},
{
"any": [
{
"path": "experiment.qualified_action_change",
"operator": "lt",
"value": 0
},
{
"path": "experiment.retention_change",
"operator": "lt",
"value": 0
},
{
"path": "experiment.revenue_quality_change",
"operator": "lt",
"value": 0
},
{
"path": "experiment.trust_signal_change",
"operator": "lt",
"value": 0
}
]
}
]
},
"then": [
{
"action": "reject_or_segment",
"target": "experiment.variant"
}
],
"else": [
{
"action": "retain",
"target": "current_text",
"reason": "No triggering condition is present."
}
],
"unless": [],
"because": "A local metric can improve while the business and reader outcome degrades.",
"diagnostics": [],
"examples": {},
"source_ids": [
"BK-033",
"BK-035"
],
"laka": {
"smallest_sufficient_intervention": true,
"primary_axes": [
"scope",
"depth",
"magnitude",
"reversibility"
]
}
}
Other copywriting rules
- CPY-001 Start from market awareness IF writing persuasive copy, THEN classify the audience as unaware, problem-aware, solution-aware, product-aware, or most-aware before choosing the message ELSE request research. Hard constraint
- CPY-002 Match lead to awareness and evidence IF awareness is known, THEN select a lead type that bridges the reader’s current state to the offer ELSE do not default to a hype lead. Context default
- CPY-003 Headline makes one credible promise IF a headline is used, THEN make its audience relevance, benefit or curiosity, and credible scope legible ELSE revise. Hard constraint
- CPY-004 Mechanism explains the promise IF the promise is unfamiliar, counterintuitive, or in a sophisticated market, THEN explain why and how the offer produces the result ELSE keep the mechanism concise. Context default
- CPY-005 Translate feature into buyer outcome IF copy names a feature, THEN connect it to functional benefit, practical outcome, and relevant emotional meaning when supported ELSE remove the feature. Context default
- CPY-006 Specificity earns credibility IF a claim uses generic superiority language AND verifiable specifics exist, THEN replace the generic phrase with the relevant specific ELSE qualify or remove it. Heuristic
- CPY-007 Proof appears after or near the claim IF a material sales claim is made, THEN attach the strongest appropriate proof close to it ELSE weaken or remove the claim. Hard constraint
- CPY-008 Testimonial is real, typicality-aware, and specific IF a testimonial is used, THEN verify identity permission, authenticity, result context, and any required typicality disclosure ELSE remove it. Hard constraint