Bow Tie Kreative Writing System

Rules / structure

STR-020 Heuristic layer: document

Apply progressive disclosure

IF novice and expert readers share a document, THEN put the essential path first and route detail to optional layers ELSE match one depth to the known audience.

Why the rule exists

Layering lets readers choose depth without forcing one group through another group’s material.

Condition

The rule fires when this evaluates true. Paths marked below must be present in the fact base; the engine reports the rest rather than guessing them.

  • ALL
    • document.audience_role_count gt 1
    • document.audience_roles contains "novice"
    • document.audience_roles contains "expert"

Facts this rule reads

Fact paths read by STR-020 and whether the analyser derives them
PathSource
document.audience_role_count You supply it
document.audience_roles You supply it

Then

  1. layer — target document
  2. link — target layers

Else

  1. retain — target current_text, No triggering condition is present.

LAKA

Smallest sufficient intervention
Yes
Primary axes

Sources

  • Principles of plain language — Digital.gov / U.S. General Services Administration link
    Design content so the intended audience can find, understand, and use it.
  • DITA 1.3 Technical Content Specification — OASIS link
    Topic-based concept, task, reference, troubleshooting, and reuse architecture.
  • Developing Quality Technical Information — Michelle Carey; Moira Lanyi; Deirdre Longo; et al.
    Quality dimensions for usable technical information.
The raw rule record

Verbatim from 10-paragraph-document-rules.json. Also available at /v1/rules/STR-020.

{
  "id": "STR-020",
  "name": "Apply progressive disclosure",
  "domain": "structure",
  "layer": "document",
  "strength": "heuristic",
  "human_logic": "IF novice and expert readers share a document, THEN put the essential path first and route detail to optional layers ELSE match one depth to the known audience.",
  "when": {
    "all": [
      {
        "path": "document.audience_role_count",
        "operator": "gt",
        "value": 1
      },
      {
        "path": "document.audience_roles",
        "operator": "contains",
        "value": "novice"
      },
      {
        "path": "document.audience_roles",
        "operator": "contains",
        "value": "expert"
      }
    ]
  },
  "then": [
    {
      "action": "layer",
      "target": "document",
      "levels": [
        "essential",
        "explanation",
        "reference_detail"
      ]
    },
    {
      "action": "link",
      "target": "layers"
    }
  ],
  "else": [
    {
      "action": "retain",
      "target": "current_text",
      "reason": "No triggering condition is present."
    }
  ],
  "unless": [],
  "because": "Layering lets readers choose depth without forcing one group through another group’s material.",
  "diagnostics": [],
  "examples": {},
  "source_ids": [
    "WEB-002",
    "WEB-008",
    "BK-024"
  ],
  "laka": {
    "smallest_sufficient_intervention": true,
    "primary_axes": [
      "scope",
      "depth",
      "magnitude",
      "reversibility"
    ]
  }
}

Other structure rules

  1. STR-001 One controlling move per paragraph IF a paragraph performs more than one unrelated rhetorical move, THEN split it at the move boundary ELSE retain. Context default
  2. STR-002 Expose the paragraph point IF the paragraph’s controlling point is absent or recoverable only after rereading, THEN state or move it to a strategic position ELSE retain an intentional delayed reveal. Heuristic
  3. STR-003 Support consequential claims IF a paragraph makes a consequential factual claim, THEN provide evidence, cite it, qualify it, or remove the claim ELSE retain. Hard constraint
  4. STR-004 Keep evidence beside the claim IF evidence is separated from the claim it supports by unrelated material, THEN move it closer or label the relation ELSE retain. Context default
  5. STR-005 Use transitions that name the relation IF adjacent paragraphs have a meaningful but unstated relation, THEN add a transition that expresses that relation ELSE retain. Context default
  6. STR-006 Delete orphan paragraphs IF a paragraph neither advances the purpose nor supports another necessary move, THEN delete or relocate it ELSE retain. Heuristic
  7. STR-007 Section answers one reader question IF a section answers multiple unrelated reader questions, THEN split and label them ELSE retain. Context default
  8. STR-008 Heading predicts content IF a heading does not accurately predict its section, THEN rename the heading or repair the section ELSE retain. Hard constraint