Bow Tie Kreative Writing System

Rules / copywriting

CPY-015 Heuristic layer: section

Story serves the buying decision

IF a sales story does not change relevance, belief, desire, trust, objection, or action, THEN cut or reframe it ELSE retain.

Why the rule exists

Narrative in copy should move the decision, not merely entertain.

Condition

The rule fires when this evaluates true. Paths marked below must be present in the fact base; the engine reports the rest rather than guessing them.

  • ALL
    • copy.story.exists eq true
    • copy.story.decision_function_count eq 0

Facts this rule reads

Fact paths read by CPY-015 and whether the analyser derives them
PathSource
copy.story.exists You supply it
copy.story.decision_function_count You supply it

Then

  1. delete_or_reframe — target copy.story

Else

  1. retain — target current_text, No triggering condition is present.

LAKA

Smallest sufficient intervention
Yes
Primary axes

Sources

  • Sell with a Story — Paul Smith
    Using relevant stories in sales and business communication.
  • Made to Stick — Chip Heath; Dan Heath
    Simple, unexpected, concrete, credible, emotional stories.
The raw rule record

Verbatim from 16-copywriting-rules.json. Also available at /v1/rules/CPY-015.

{
  "id": "CPY-015",
  "name": "Story serves the buying decision",
  "domain": "copywriting",
  "layer": "section",
  "strength": "heuristic",
  "human_logic": "IF a sales story does not change relevance, belief, desire, trust, objection, or action, THEN cut or reframe it ELSE retain.",
  "when": {
    "all": [
      {
        "path": "copy.story.exists",
        "operator": "eq",
        "value": true
      },
      {
        "path": "copy.story.decision_function_count",
        "operator": "eq",
        "value": 0
      }
    ]
  },
  "then": [
    {
      "action": "delete_or_reframe",
      "target": "copy.story",
      "allowed_functions": [
        "relevance",
        "belief",
        "desire",
        "trust",
        "objection",
        "action"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "else": [
    {
      "action": "retain",
      "target": "current_text",
      "reason": "No triggering condition is present."
    }
  ],
  "unless": [],
  "because": "Narrative in copy should move the decision, not merely entertain.",
  "diagnostics": [],
  "examples": {},
  "source_ids": [
    "BK-038",
    "BK-037"
  ],
  "laka": {
    "smallest_sufficient_intervention": true,
    "primary_axes": [
      "scope",
      "depth",
      "magnitude",
      "reversibility"
    ]
  }
}

Other copywriting rules

  1. CPY-001 Start from market awareness IF writing persuasive copy, THEN classify the audience as unaware, problem-aware, solution-aware, product-aware, or most-aware before choosing the message ELSE request research. Hard constraint
  2. CPY-002 Match lead to awareness and evidence IF awareness is known, THEN select a lead type that bridges the reader’s current state to the offer ELSE do not default to a hype lead. Context default
  3. CPY-003 Headline makes one credible promise IF a headline is used, THEN make its audience relevance, benefit or curiosity, and credible scope legible ELSE revise. Hard constraint
  4. CPY-004 Mechanism explains the promise IF the promise is unfamiliar, counterintuitive, or in a sophisticated market, THEN explain why and how the offer produces the result ELSE keep the mechanism concise. Context default
  5. CPY-005 Translate feature into buyer outcome IF copy names a feature, THEN connect it to functional benefit, practical outcome, and relevant emotional meaning when supported ELSE remove the feature. Context default
  6. CPY-006 Specificity earns credibility IF a claim uses generic superiority language AND verifiable specifics exist, THEN replace the generic phrase with the relevant specific ELSE qualify or remove it. Heuristic
  7. CPY-007 Proof appears after or near the claim IF a material sales claim is made, THEN attach the strongest appropriate proof close to it ELSE weaken or remove the claim. Hard constraint
  8. CPY-008 Testimonial is real, typicality-aware, and specific IF a testimonial is used, THEN verify identity permission, authenticity, result context, and any required typicality disclosure ELSE remove it. Hard constraint