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NAR-014 Creative option layer: document

Foreshadow without announcing

IF a later turn requires preparation, THEN plant a fair detail that has an immediate function and gains a second meaning later ELSE do not add arbitrary clues.

Why the rule exists

Fair preparation supports surprise without making the turn feel unearned.

Condition

The rule fires when this evaluates true. Paths marked below must be present in the fact base; the engine reports the rest rather than guessing them.

  • document.later_turn.requires_setup eq true

Facts this rule reads

PathSource
document.later_turn.requires_setup You supply it

Then

  1. insert — target document.foreshadowing

Else

  1. retain — target current_text, No triggering condition is present.

LAKA

Smallest sufficient intervention
Yes
Primary axes

Sources

  • Story — Robert McKee
    Scene design, causality, conflict, and narrative structure.
The raw rule record

Verbatim from 13-narrative-rules.json. Also available at /v1/rules/NAR-014.

{
  "id": "NAR-014",
  "name": "Foreshadow without announcing",
  "domain": "narrative",
  "layer": "document",
  "strength": "creative_option",
  "human_logic": "IF a later turn requires preparation, THEN plant a fair detail that has an immediate function and gains a second meaning later ELSE do not add arbitrary clues.",
  "when": {
    "path": "document.later_turn.requires_setup",
    "operator": "eq",
    "value": true
  },
  "then": [
    {
      "action": "insert",
      "target": "document.foreshadowing",
      "requirements": [
        "immediate_function",
        "later_reinterpretation",
        "proportionate_visibility"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "else": [
    {
      "action": "retain",
      "target": "current_text",
      "reason": "No triggering condition is present."
    }
  ],
  "unless": [],
  "because": "Fair preparation supports surprise without making the turn feel unearned.",
  "diagnostics": [],
  "examples": {},
  "source_ids": [
    "BK-016"
  ],
  "laka": {
    "smallest_sufficient_intervention": true,
    "primary_axes": [
      "scope",
      "depth",
      "magnitude",
      "reversibility"
    ]
  }
}

Other narrative rules

  1. NAR-001 Give the focal agent a desire IF a narrative section expects forward motion AND the focal agent has no legible desire or need, THEN reveal one ELSE retain deliberate mystery with another source of propulsion. Context default
  2. NAR-002 Obstacle opposes the desire IF the focal agent has a desire but no meaningful resistance, THEN introduce an external, interpersonal, internal, or systemic obstacle ELSE retain. Context default
  3. NAR-003 Make stakes change choice IF failure or success would not alter the agent’s choices, relationships, identity, resources, safety, or future, THEN strengthen or clarify stakes ELSE retain a low-stakes form by design. Context default
  4. NAR-004 Events cause later events IF a major event has no causal, motivational, or thematic relation to what precedes it, THEN connect, foreshadow, move, or remove it ELSE retain. Hard constraint
  5. NAR-005 Scene contains a turn IF a scene begins and ends with the same relevant value, knowledge, power, relationship, or plan, THEN add a turn or compress the scene ELSE retain an intentional atmosphere scene. Heuristic
  6. NAR-006 Choice reveals character IF the story asserts a trait without a consequential choice that demonstrates it, THEN create or cite such a choice ELSE retain. Heuristic
  7. NAR-007 Control point of view IF perception, knowledge, or interior access exceeds the established viewpoint without a marked shift, THEN remove, recast, or mark the shift ELSE retain. Hard constraint
  8. NAR-008 Keep narrative tense stable IF narrative tense changes without a time-frame or mode shift, THEN restore the established tense ELSE retain. Context default