Bow Tie Kreative Writing System

Rules / rhythm

VOI-004 Heuristic layer: paragraph

Vary sentence length for function

IF sentence lengths are mechanically uniform, THEN vary them according to emphasis, explanation, transition, and pace ELSE retain.

Why the rule exists

Controlled variation creates rhythm and maps length to cognitive function.

Condition

The rule fires when this evaluates true. Paths marked below must be present in the fact base; the engine reports the rest rather than guessing them.

  • paragraph.sentence_length_variance eq "near_zero"

Facts this rule reads

Fact paths read by VOI-004 and whether the analyser derives them
PathSource
paragraph.sentence_length_variance You supply it

Then

  1. vary — target paragraph.sentence_lengths

Else

  1. retain — target current_text, No triggering condition is present.

LAKA

Smallest sufficient intervention
Yes
Primary axes

Sources

  • On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft — Stephen King
    Writing habits, revision, description, and storytelling craft.
  • On Writing Well — William Zinsser
    Clarity, simplicity, voice, and nonfiction craft.
  • Steering the Craft — Ursula K. Le Guin
    Sound, rhythm, syntax, point of view, and exercises.
The raw rule record

Verbatim from 12-voice-rhythm-rules.json. Also available at /v1/rules/VOI-004.

{
  "id": "VOI-004",
  "name": "Vary sentence length for function",
  "domain": "rhythm",
  "layer": "paragraph",
  "strength": "heuristic",
  "human_logic": "IF sentence lengths are mechanically uniform, THEN vary them according to emphasis, explanation, transition, and pace ELSE retain.",
  "when": {
    "path": "paragraph.sentence_length_variance",
    "operator": "eq",
    "value": "near_zero"
  },
  "then": [
    {
      "action": "vary",
      "target": "paragraph.sentence_lengths",
      "by_function": {
        "short": "emphasis_or_transition",
        "medium": "core_explanation",
        "long": "qualified_relationship"
      }
    }
  ],
  "else": [
    {
      "action": "retain",
      "target": "current_text",
      "reason": "No triggering condition is present."
    }
  ],
  "unless": [],
  "because": "Controlled variation creates rhythm and maps length to cognitive function.",
  "diagnostics": [],
  "examples": {},
  "source_ids": [
    "BK-011",
    "BK-013",
    "BK-019"
  ],
  "laka": {
    "smallest_sufficient_intervention": true,
    "primary_axes": [
      "scope",
      "depth",
      "magnitude",
      "reversibility"
    ]
  }
}

Other rhythm rules

  1. VOI-005 Short sentence after complexity IF a dense explanation reaches its key consequence, THEN a short sentence may isolate the payoff ELSE continue normal cadence. Creative option
  2. VOI-006 Read prose aloud IF prose is intended for humans, THEN read representative passages aloud or with text-to-speech and flag breath, ambiguity, repetition, and unnatural stress ELSE retain. Heuristic
  3. VOI-007 Place emphasis at structural edges IF one idea deserves emphasis, THEN place it at the sentence opening or ending rather than burying it mid-clause ELSE retain. Heuristic
  4. VOI-008 Limit accidental alliteration and rhyme IF repeated sound distracts from serious meaning AND is unintended, THEN vary one word ELSE retain purposeful sound pattern. Heuristic
  5. VOI-009 Use repetition with a job IF a word or structure repeats, THEN retain it only for cohesion, emphasis, rhythm, motif, instruction consistency, or technical precision ELSE vary or delete it. Creative option