Bow Tie Kreative Writing System

Rules / rhythm

VOI-009 Creative option layer: paragraph

Use repetition with a job

IF a word or structure repeats, THEN retain it only for cohesion, emphasis, rhythm, motif, instruction consistency, or technical precision ELSE vary or delete it.

Why the rule exists

Repetition is powerful when patterned and tiring when accidental.

Condition

The rule fires when this evaluates true. Paths marked below must be present in the fact base; the engine reports the rest rather than guessing them.

  • paragraph.repetition.exists eq true

Facts this rule reads

Fact paths read by VOI-009 and whether the analyser derives them
PathSource
paragraph.repetition.exists You supply it

Then

  1. verify — target paragraph.repetition.function
  2. delete_or_vary — target paragraph.repetition

Else

  1. retain — target current_text, No triggering condition is present.

LAKA

Smallest sufficient intervention
Yes
Primary axes

Sources

  • On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft — Stephen King
    Writing habits, revision, description, and storytelling craft.
  • Steering the Craft — Ursula K. Le Guin
    Sound, rhythm, syntax, point of view, and exercises.
  • Microsoft Writing Style Guide — Microsoft link
    Warm, clear, concise, helpful technical communication.
The raw rule record

Verbatim from 12-voice-rhythm-rules.json. Also available at /v1/rules/VOI-009.

{
  "id": "VOI-009",
  "name": "Use repetition with a job",
  "domain": "rhythm",
  "layer": "paragraph",
  "strength": "creative_option",
  "human_logic": "IF a word or structure repeats, THEN retain it only for cohesion, emphasis, rhythm, motif, instruction consistency, or technical precision ELSE vary or delete it.",
  "when": {
    "path": "paragraph.repetition.exists",
    "operator": "eq",
    "value": true
  },
  "then": [
    {
      "action": "verify",
      "target": "paragraph.repetition.function",
      "allowed": [
        "cohesion",
        "emphasis",
        "rhythm",
        "motif",
        "instruction_consistency",
        "technical_precision"
      ]
    },
    {
      "action": "delete_or_vary",
      "target": "paragraph.repetition",
      "when": "function_missing"
    }
  ],
  "else": [
    {
      "action": "retain",
      "target": "current_text",
      "reason": "No triggering condition is present."
    }
  ],
  "unless": [],
  "because": "Repetition is powerful when patterned and tiring when accidental.",
  "diagnostics": [],
  "examples": {},
  "source_ids": [
    "BK-011",
    "BK-019",
    "WEB-004"
  ],
  "laka": {
    "smallest_sufficient_intervention": true,
    "primary_axes": [
      "scope",
      "depth",
      "magnitude",
      "reversibility"
    ]
  }
}

Other rhythm rules

  1. VOI-004 Vary sentence length for function IF sentence lengths are mechanically uniform, THEN vary them according to emphasis, explanation, transition, and pace ELSE retain. Heuristic
  2. VOI-005 Short sentence after complexity IF a dense explanation reaches its key consequence, THEN a short sentence may isolate the payoff ELSE continue normal cadence. Creative option
  3. VOI-006 Read prose aloud IF prose is intended for humans, THEN read representative passages aloud or with text-to-speech and flag breath, ambiguity, repetition, and unnatural stress ELSE retain. Heuristic
  4. VOI-007 Place emphasis at structural edges IF one idea deserves emphasis, THEN place it at the sentence opening or ending rather than burying it mid-clause ELSE retain. Heuristic
  5. VOI-008 Limit accidental alliteration and rhyme IF repeated sound distracts from serious meaning AND is unintended, THEN vary one word ELSE retain purposeful sound pattern. Heuristic